• 내가 말한 문장

Honestly, I choose this topic more - this topic is more technical, and after I choose it, I acknowledget it - it's not only technical, it's more complext topic.

• 자체 피드백:
  • 말을 너무 많이 더듬었다.
  • 지난번 총평과 이번 총평 두번 다 말을 하기 전에 천천히 생각하고 어느 정도 문장을 완성한다음에 말하라고 하는 피드백이 있었으니 좀 더 천천히 말하자.

• 내가 말한 문장

When I sawed question - question 6, it's comparing the value of human life and the life on, and animla. When I saw it, I am so surpised, because I haven't - don't think about it. Did I make a mistake?

• 첨삭 받은 문장

When I saw question 6, I was taken aback by its gravity; comparing the value of human lives and animal ones is an intense converation. I hadn't considered that it would be a part of the lesson content. I thought: Did I make a mistake?

• saw를 말할때 -ed 발을을 했다는게 놀라웠다. 그리고 여전히 말을 더듬고 있다. 심지어 haven’t라고 뱉어놓고 didn’t 로 고치고 있다. 고등학생이 되기 전까지 말을 정말 많이 더듬으면서 말했던 걸로 기억하는데, 영어에서도 이 문제를 겪을줄 몰랐다. 고등학교때는 말을 엄청나게 많이 해서 일단 아무 말이나 내뱉어도 이어서 말할 수 있도록 순간 대응력을 늘리는 것을 목표로 연습해서 이를 고쳤던것 같은데.. 쉽지 않을 것 같다.

• 내가 말한 문장

When I learn the AI - i'm - I didn't think the AI is nearly intelligence, because it's only the think, just make it with mathematic, and people said machine can be learning but I don't think machine learning is really learning because it is - it's very different to comparing to teaching our kid - it's just mathematic and calculus, it's based on only calculus.

• 첨삭 받은 문장

AI is popular understood as a learning machine. I am skeptical: I don't think machine learning resembles anything beyound a mathematical approximation of the process. A machine that is 'learning' in the sense that we use it now undergoes very different stressors, inputs, and experiences than the education of a human child. Its world is all mathematics and calculus; it's based only on calculus.

• 부정형으로 말할때, be동사, do/does/did, have/has/had 를 말할때 엄청 틀린다. 어떻게 해야지 자연스럽게 나올까?

• 내가 말한 문장

I learned that. I'm participated in Google AI contest in maybe 2018 or 19, in Summer, they - the contest aksed to us just categorizing cat and dog. And second problem is predicting other surface of the car - they just - this [] has just one side of car, and predicting the other side. I'm not - I didn't win a prize but the experience is surely valuable.

• 첨삭받은 문장

In the summer of 2018 or 19, I participated in the Google AI contest. They provided us with two problems; the first was easy. We were to categorize cats and dogs. The second problem was not so simple. We were to predict the alternate/opposite side of a car given data about the surface of one of the sides. While I didn't win a prize, i am certainly grateful to have had the experience.

• 시간을 제일 처음에 말하려고 노력하자. 지금까지 시간이 들어가있는 문장들은 모조리 제일 처음에 시간을 말하도록 첨삭받았다.

• paraphrasing 은 매번 볼떄마다 내가 저렇게 말할 수 있는가?

• 문법

  • be-to 용법
    • 예정 : ‘~할 예정이다’ = be going to
      • I am to eat out tomorrow.
      • I am to be a sophomore next year.
    • 의무 : ‘~해야 한다’ = have to
      • People are to wear masks.
      • You are to get back by 11 p.m.
    • 의도 : ‘~하려면’ = want to
      • If you are to travel abroad, book your plan ticket first.
      • If you are to pass your exam, study hard.
    • 가능: ‘~할 수 있다.’ = be able to
      • No one was to be seen on the street.
      • Something is to be found in the basement.
    • 운명 : ‘~할 운명이다’ = be destined to
      • They were to marry.
      • She was to meet him in the end.